I'm back with an opinion.

Your biography looks great.  In the second paragraph, make it "Far East" instead of "far east."  Change "different market to the newspaper" to "different market from the newspaper."  (minor changes)

Your statement is excellent--it helped me understand why I like your work.  However, I had difficulty with the second sentence of the second paragraph.  I'm using my psychic abilities here--I think you mean this:  ""My primary choice is to paint on canvas:  I like the punishment I can inflict on it and the way--when it can be moved to a clean wall after a battle has been fought--the scars remain visible."

I love your paintings and your titles.  A terrific website!

Hallie

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Very nice site. Simple but elegant.

I agree that the galleries don't appear much different from one another and that you should put the most recent dates first on your resume page.

I looked at your website with interest because I am considering an attempt at creating one.  I worked for a while as an editor for the Federal government so I have a critical eye.

The opening page above is well done; however, "adam" should line up with "parsons."  I agree with the comment below; I cannot find any distinction between the three galleries.

Resumes usually begin with the most recent; yours is the opposite.

Your biography has quite a few minor errors and could be more succinct.  Print a copy and have someone proofread it and check your prepositions (i.e.; of, for, with); I believe curators, collectors and art consultants will look for professionalism.

p.s. Editing is a lot easier than writing.  Good work--you've had an interesting life.

I think it looks great, but the different galleries could be catagorized more.